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Rewrite#3

  Hello Everyone, In today’s entry, I want to talk about the videos I have watched and how the information that I have learned can be used for my future reading.     My earlier experience with studying was not particularly good, let me tell you that I was merely lucky that I got on fine in high school. I would study at the last minute and or focus on one subject as I did not even know how to properly study and would try to find study tips on YouTube rather than study. That was until what I discovered in this research to which I will be separating into three separate paragraphs.     For this blog, we were asked to watch a video by Mike and Matty  where Mike where they talk about the three best study tips with scientific evidence. In this, he will tell us how to study for exams, how to train your brain to learn effectively again with the help of science.  He mentions that quizzing yourself, “ spacing ...

Final rewrite

Hello everyone, Today I will be talking about my one-on-one feedback with my lecturer   In my experience of rewriting my previous blog post called study skills, which in my earlier blog post during this semester, back to when I did not know what to do and I just wrote whatever that comes into my mind.  In this feedback, she said that although my work was good and well linked, there are a few minor things that I can improve on moving forward.   As she said in her feedback on my blog “ Here are a couple of specific things that might help you improve going forward:   I think a little more clarity in what you are reading/ watching and why would be great. For example, you say  “ In my research, I came across a  YouTube  channel called Mike and Matty ”  but really this is one of the videos you were asked to watch as part of the task.  There is nothing wrong with just saying “For this blog we were asked to watch a video by Mike and Matty”....