Revising writing

 Hello Everyone,

 

Today I will be talking about how the rewritten work of my blog post that I have submitted for feedback went and how I changed it to be a bit better than how I have written it beforehand.


To start off my rewriting experience was quite difficult as I must think hard about what I am going to say and how I would structure the layout of my post to be as well as how it can appeal to the readers that will be reading the blog post, having read the following articles have helped me understand how to structure my paragraphs. Although it wasn’t fun to do I had learned a lot from this.


The things that I have learned use an active voice and what I think they meant by this is to word sentences to make them make sense. As well as mix things up a bit with the words being used so that it won’t be as repetitive and boring to read and to tell readers what is being discussed that way the readers would not be confused.


For me using quotes helps prove my point but also credits the person that made that claim which reminds me to also cite my sources which then prevents me from plagiarising.


 Thanks for tuning in!


Sources:

Nine Basic Ways to Improve Your Style in Academic Writing

Paragraph-Level Revision


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